fleetsparrow | Commentary Meme

Pick a paragraph (or any passage between... let's say 100 and 600 words) from anything I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

Please do this with any fic I've written. Yes, even the ones that aren't super popular. Let me riff my own work.